I think that many of my classmates had some good suggestions.
Some suggestions that I got were to go into greater detail, and don't assume that my reader know what I am referring to. This can be hard, but I think that it is critical to not losing the reader.
Also that I need to keep the reader interested in the beginning, middle and end. To finish strong, and not lose focus.
Overall, my classmates said that the article could be very strong with enough good interviews, and interesting visual pictures for the reader to conclude to.
I think that I have gotten some very good feedback and that this will be helpful to make my feature be more colorful, and appealing to not only readers, but to editors.
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